Here are the paragraphs I looked at during class. I include the original paragraph and the paragraph after editing (with topic in bold and point of view in italics in the topic sentence).
As always, if I didn't go over your paragraph in class please feel free to contact me and we can set up a meeting to discuss it.
There are some general writing tips at the end.
This week there's nothing to download. I'll download some stuff after class but not before.
See y'all in class!
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